Mountain Stream Revised

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Comment by Michael J. Severin on October 13, 2015 at 10:48

Your welcome Laurena! ...I am very happy I could help!!! :)))

Comment by Laurena Beirnes on October 13, 2015 at 3:18

Michael, I did blend the blue/green colour in as you suggested and thankyou, what a difference.  I have not had time to take a photo of it as I have been busy with Thanksgiving. (Canada)

Many thanks Michael!

Comment by Laurena Beirnes on October 13, 2015 at 3:15

Thank you Robert!  I have to give a big thanks to Michael as his suggestions really helped.

Comment by Robert H. Smith on October 9, 2015 at 17:17

beautiful !!!

Comment by Michael J. Severin on October 9, 2015 at 6:43

Beautiful Laurena!!! ......Now, I would like you to take that blue/green color and gently ..very gently ..blend it into the white strip of foam going across the top.  Don't blend the white out ..just merge the blue/green into the top edge ..you might need to go back and forth ..blending a little of the blue/green into the white, and then pulling some of he white foam back into the blue/green.  Don't worry if you make a mistake, you can always re add  the foam.  BTW,   I love the way you put the underwater rocks in the cascade.  Now,  where the white water strip meets the rocks at the far right, in that little wedge there.. ...leave that part alone.....that part is perfect!!  I am just trying to get the blue/green water and foam to merge as one ..instead of the two being disconnected.   When you have done that ....then your painting is finished!!    Beautiful work!! 

Comment by Laurena Beirnes on October 9, 2015 at 4:17

Michael, thank you for your suggestions, here is the painting now.  Sorry about the shine on the upper left area