Paradise - revised

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Comment by Marta Nowicka on December 31, 2016 at 4:55

Thanks. Yes, I see that. I'm starting new painting on biger canvas and I will try to do it better this time

Comment by Michael J. Severin on December 31, 2016 at 4:42

Hi Marta.  Better, but you still have 3 clouds that are "kissing" .... they need to over lap .. and.... there needs to be a size and shape variation between them.