French Door Corrected

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Comment by Candi Hogan on April 17, 2016 at 5:03

THANKS Jon!  Appreciate your advise!

Comment by Jon Main on April 17, 2016 at 2:56

I like the scene and muted color, Candi - I see this sort of door all th etime of course - and, boy, I love it! :), but in yur painting there doesn't seem to be clear/definite value structure - its' all mid value... ...?

- it's going to be a real shallow picture plane even with  a nifty value structure - I feel you need more light and shade. Another idea I have looking at it, is to be a little more indistinct/blurred in the corners (a hieracrchy of edges/distinctness with only the centre of interest being 'clear'

Comment by Candi Hogan on April 15, 2016 at 6:52

Thanks Jessica!

Comment by Jessica Futerman on April 15, 2016 at 4:56

It's a charming scene, Candi!