Late Afternoon in Akko, Version 2

Thanks for the helpful comments, everyone - worked on this quite a bit - see the first version for Michael's notes about perspective in the first version, which I attempted to correct here. The easiest way was to change the horizon line back to where it was when I took the photo & try to figure out the vanishing points - I'm sure it's still not exactly right, but I hope it reads better now!

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Comment by Jessica Futerman on December 25, 2013 at 4:04: Thank you very much Ningning for taking the time to give me your impressions on this painting! I really appreciate your encouragement!

Comment by Ningning Li on December 25, 2013 at 3:26: This is very complimentary. Jessica, it must cost you a lot of time . You did a very good job. Apart from other nice done elements, what impress me most is they way you handled the water which is so realistic and the light which shwering every thing in the painting, Amazing light effect you achieved, Congradulations!!!

Comment by Jessica Futerman on December 6, 2013 at 23:43: Thanks Michael & welcome back from your holiday!

Comment by Michael J. Severin on December 6, 2013 at 15:27: Very nice Jessica!!! .....

Comment by Jessica Futerman on November 10, 2013 at 7:39: Thank you Ann! Glad you think the walls look sturdy - in fact, these ramparts are hundreds of years old, so they've stood the test of time! By the way, have a great holiday!

Comment by Ann Turner on November 9, 2013 at 20:24: Looks good to me, those walls won't be falling down soon :)

Comment by Jessica Futerman on November 9, 2013 at 9:52: Thanks a lot, Laura & Jon for taking the time to look & for your encouragement! It's greatly appreciated!