Rush Creek3

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Comment by Laura Xu on July 30, 2014 at 16:53

Thank you Silvana!

Comment by Silvana M Albano on July 30, 2014 at 10:51

Really like the composition Laura!!!

Comment by Laura Xu on July 30, 2014 at 9:15

Hi Joy, thank you for following this up and I am very happy to hear it is improved.

This place is near Stu's home we had plein air two weeks ago, unfortunately I was too late when I got there dur to very bad traffic. But I stayed there long enough to enjoy the place and walked around to take some photos. Actually there is a path on the left of dry grass that is not on this painting, but you can look at my another painting called "plein air day".

Comment by Laura Xu on July 30, 2014 at 8:24

Thank you all my dear frients comments and suggestions and encougement!

I just attached the re-touched version to the comment section. I hope it is improved little bit.

Comment by Laura Xu on July 30, 2014 at 8:19

Comment by Laura Xu on July 30, 2014 at 5:38

Thank you, Joy! Good catch! I will take care of these bugs.

Comment by Laura Xu on July 30, 2014 at 4:20

Jon, Ann, thank you very much for you encouragement! I will try my best to enhance these areas.

Comment by Ann Turner on July 29, 2014 at 18:20

Interesting design Laura. Just break up some of the shapes as suggested and add a little sparkle to the water in the distance. Nice use of greyed color in the far-ground.

Comment by Jon Main on July 29, 2014 at 17:54

Yep, looking really excllent and promising - good color!

Comment by Laura Xu on July 29, 2014 at 16:34

Stu, thank you! I will work on the fix.

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