The Sea Shack

20 x 20 oil on canvas

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Comment by Vladimir Gmyria on May 13, 2013 at 8:56: I support Ann.There is no loose strokes. I will do the same on this stage.Hold on.

Comment by Ann Turner on May 13, 2013 at 8:17: The atmospheric feeling is well done with soft edges in the far greyed building and the darker values in the front building. I think that the front building is scaled a little too large for this composition, if you want to do another try to make it a little smaller. Your water is a little muddy. Let is dry and then go over it with the soft strokes of blues and greens that Richard uses but don't get carried away with blending or it will muddy again. I also like the light in the sky over the far building, the birds and the way that you handled the boats in this area. Just a thought to make nice painting better. Please post if you make changes.

Comment by Lori Ippolito on May 13, 2013 at 3:51: Thanks so much Laura & Silvana!!

Comment by Silvana M Albano on May 13, 2013 at 2:13: I like it! Specially the transitions. It seems to be so natural in this painting of yours!

Comment by Lori Ippolito on May 12, 2013 at 17:10: this is my first attempt at this month's workshop challenge.. I look forward to comments & critiques:)