SF bus station

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Comment by Laura Xu on July 24, 2013 at 7:22

Ningning, I am so glad you like this one. Thank you for your detailed comments. I already retouched the painting added another wheel for the trolley and also added shadow for the car in the sun light. May be i also should darken the building's color in the shadow side based on the rule we just learned.

Comment by Ningning Li on July 24, 2013 at 2:12

Laura, I enjoy this one very much. The beautiful subtle color change of the those buildings, The strong light and shadow , warm and cool  contrast, the perspectives, the detail likeness and size relationship of the vehicles in the street  are all very well done. The red colour of the cable bus really push it to the front of the stage. Excellent design. If I were you, I will put another wheel at the right side of the cable bus to keep it balanced. just an idea. Some of our art friends do not copy the reality, their work are very charmming and exciting. Hazel is one of them. I love her work for this W23. By the way I enjoy your confident brushstrokes too. Very well done.

Comment by Laura Xu on July 20, 2013 at 18:15

I am glad you like it Linda, Silvana. Thanks!

Comment by Linda L. Kano on July 20, 2013 at 13:48

Very nice.  I bet you really enjoyed painting this one!

Comment by Silvana M Albano on July 20, 2013 at 7:31

Great Laura!!!!

Comment by Dorian Aronson on July 20, 2013 at 6:38

Yes you can!  Go for it.......: ))

Comment by Laura Xu on July 20, 2013 at 6:20

Thank you all for the comments. Dor, I didn't add tag on the painting because I already have other street paintings having tag. I am not sure we are suppose to submit multiple paintings in one workshop.

Comment by Stuart J. Gourlay on July 19, 2013 at 22:05

Nice work Laura. Stu

Comment by Jessica Futerman on July 19, 2013 at 21:33

Hi Laura - this is a very appealing version of the city scene - lovely colour & I like the addition of the bus/trolley stop with the people.  Very good perspective drawing too!

Comment by Dorian Aronson on July 19, 2013 at 20:00

I am very impressed.    Don't forget to put in your tag.........Smiles : ))

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