Still Life-Grapes and Pear

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Comment by Joseph Byrd (Joe) on February 27, 2012 at 17:15

You are so sweet to say, Li.

Comment by Ningning Li on February 27, 2012 at 3:30

I think Sharon 's idea is much better than mine. Very smart sharon! So you do not have to change anything, just add some thing at the right side that will perfectly balance your composition.  Your grapes are beautiful being with your other objects. I regrete that I suggested you to paint the grapes what I believe is the way . How narrow minded I am. Every bird should sing with the voice that the God give to them.  Your painting is beautiful!

Comment by Sharon Casavant on February 24, 2012 at 2:35

I like it!  Vibrant!  maybe you can add 3 more grapes on the right side but make them in the center of the "pear line" if you know what I mean. 

Comment by Joseph Byrd (Joe) on February 24, 2012 at 2:21

Thank  you li. You are right about composition. I love your painting. Brush stokes great. you did a great job on your grapes. you took more time than I did. Congratulations.

 

Comment by Ningning Li on February 23, 2012 at 16:36

I like it because the dear colour, the movement of light created by your confident brush work and colour combination. Very interesting and have a strong impact to me. powerful and joyful as most of your works. Only one thing I would improve if I were you.  I would move the setup to the rightside a bit with the shadow of the pear to balance the composition. and lower a bit the setup  to make the upper part of the canvas more space to show the activities there.  Well done! Li