Worked on this quite a lot, incorporating suggestions from Michael S - mainly on the reeds & water. I appreciate any more ideas anyone has to improve this! Thanks!

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Comment by Michael J. Severin on January 22, 2014 at 3:07

Well done Jessica!! ....very nice job on the bottom edge of the reeds!! ...note how much more interesting and real that broken line looks!! ...I see you redid that regular shape at the far right of the reeds into a more irregular shape ..good.  Now your water looks more related to everything else ...it is NOT ..here is the land and here is the water ..putting the ground colors into it always helps relate.  I do not see anything that needs improvement Jessica? ...

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