Golden Gate

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Comment by Stuart J. Gourlay on June 28, 2013 at 14:15

Jess, I thinks it's better, but it was already very good. I agree with Sharon; lose the birds; they are a distraction. Stu

Comment by Jess Paskel on June 28, 2013 at 11:59

Thanks Sharon - I reposted some changes I did let me know if that's any better :)

Comment by Sharon Casavant on June 28, 2013 at 1:41

Jess, your rock is perfect, just beautiful!   I just don't like the birds flying out of the picture.  Awesome job on the lighting on the water and the atmospheric perspective.

Comment by Jess Paskel on June 27, 2013 at 14:39

Thank you Manneherrin! Appreciate it!

Comment by Manneherrin on June 27, 2013 at 1:41

yay! Water that doesnt look like Koolaid!.. well done.. all you gotta do is soften the edge of the little rock and you will notice it will flow with the big one..love love love this render.. good job!!!

Comment by Jess Paskel on June 25, 2013 at 11:01

Thank you Ngaire! :)

Comment by Jess Paskel on June 25, 2013 at 11:01

Thanks Jim - you know I was struggling with that little rock - and gave up literally the last day and just posted the pic.  I wasn't sure if highlighting that area would take away from the upper part or not.  And if I did highlight that area would the water below need more work to match it.  But now that I'm looking at it - it still bugs me and I'm not sure either how to fix it!  Thanks for your feedback - greatly appreciate it!

Comment by Jess Paskel on June 25, 2013 at 10:55

Thanks you Montalvo - means a lot!

Comment by Ngaire Lincoln on June 25, 2013 at 8:58

Fantastic Jess. :)

Comment by Jim Haycock on June 25, 2013 at 8:01

Great work, Jess!  I really like the dramatic effect of the rock and the light coming in from that right side.  The bridge stands out, but it isn't over-blown.  And, the colors are great -- nice sky, clouds, etc.   The ONLY thing you might consider is a little more separation of the smaller rock in the front from the big one.  I can't tell you HOW to do that, but there is a little bit of lightness on the bigger rock just behind the small one that you might want to add to the smaller one.  (Not sure on that though... you might get the advice from one of the "techies" or hopefully from Richard on that...)  But, this is really nice!

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