Golden Gate

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Comment by Christine Lewis on June 24, 2013 at 3:19

very nice rock....it has a lot of unity. I like it a lot

Comment by Jessica Futerman on June 23, 2013 at 18:25

Lovely - the hints of the sailboats in the background really add to the feeling of distance & you have nice sparkle on the water.

Comment by Jess Paskel on June 23, 2013 at 13:55

Stu ,

Awesome - thanks so much for the feedback.  Really really  appreciate it!  Going to see what I can do!

Comment by Jess Paskel on June 23, 2013 at 13:52

Thanks so much Laura - I loved yours also!

Comment by Stuart J. Gourlay on June 23, 2013 at 12:12

Jess, here is the critique: nice value structure with great atmospheric perspective, your rock shapes are very good but a few more sharp edges would help; the highliting on the rock is perfect; your color harmony is excellent.  Your two sailboats makie great pointers and draw the eye back in; you could lose the two birds and not miss them.  Your bridge came out very well but a little more graying and lightening of it where it goes behind the rock would add to the depth--same with the shorline.  These are very minor points; this is an excellent painting and you have come much farther since you have been on this site than you have to go.  Keep it up; you are on a ROLL.   Stu

Comment by Laura Xu on June 23, 2013 at 11:56

This is really beautiful painting. I love the rock, it is so real and comfortable to look. Great job Jess!

Comment by Jess Paskel on June 23, 2013 at 11:31

Thanks Diane and Silvana.

Comment by Silvana M Albano on June 23, 2013 at 11:28

Not with the credit card use!!!! I can assure you!

Comment by diane boucher on June 23, 2013 at 11:24

Nowhere to go I love it!

Comment by Jess Paskel on June 23, 2013 at 10:46

Thanks Silvana, I appreciate it!  I still feel like I have miles to go!

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