Blockin: Pyrenees -Starting for Spain

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Comment by Michael J. Severin on June 13, 2016 at 4:59

Oh, not clouds ..snow .... sorry.  I commented about color and value on your other version of this painting, but the colors and values look different on this one .... photography issue?  Anyway, if it is the photo, then please disregard my comments on your newly posted  version of this. :))  .... except for the straight line of those trees ... I am sticking with that.

Comment by Jon Main on June 4, 2016 at 19:27

Hi, Joy - thanks - I see what you mean - dunno if I can sort that, hmmmm  - the mountain on the right bothers me more - rather than adjusting it I'm half-way through a new verson - fingers crosssed it comes out a bit better!

Comment by Jon Main on June 3, 2016 at 17:47

Thanks Ann and Jessica! - got a few issue to try and resolve - so thanks for the pointers -apart from all the possible adjustments, there was a tree in the foreground I left out! and I don't know whether to try and put it in, hmmm....

Comment by Jessica Futerman on June 3, 2016 at 16:44

What a beautiful scene, Jon!  Love the light in this & the interesting lines of the rooftops. Also that figure on the road adds a lot.  Maybe you could make the tree line less of a straight line on the sunny side, showing the mountain here & there through it?  

Comment by Ann Turner on June 3, 2016 at 14:55

Nice composition Jon. I like your defined areas of shadow and light then down the road with your figure. Don't do much more to it just some sparkles of light here and there.