Workshop18

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Comment by Carolyn Schena on February 25, 2013 at 4:43

Thanks Huda,

easy hard work is a great compliment! I llike Michaels suggestions and hope to incoporate those this week

Comment by Huda jodah A.Omar on February 25, 2013 at 0:43

I like the atmosphere feeling .made me feel that the sun ha just gone away .there are no much detail which made the painting looks like the easy hard work.

Comment by Michael J. Severin on February 21, 2013 at 6:06

Hi Carolyn .. No, I was referring to the patch of green foliage on the right (beneath the dark branch). Also, the patch of sand next to the green foliage ....Just some final thick strokes that say "light" ..your focal point will be firmly established!

Comment by Carolyn Schena on February 21, 2013 at 5:52

Thanks for the feedback Michael - did you mean the foliage on the left of the painting?

 

Comment by Michael J. Severin on February 21, 2013 at 4:47

The transluscent  (spelling ..blah!) water in the pond was very well done!!! ..nice job on a very difficult part of the painting.  I think a final stroke of  a sunny green in your green foilage (sic!) and a nice thick stroke of sunlit sand at the far beach where it meets your green ...will making the painting "pop".  ..sorry, ..my spelling is terrible today!!!!?

Comment by Dorian Aronson on February 20, 2013 at 17:05

Gorgeous!  Smiles coming your way : ))