Fisherman's wharf

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Comment by Lori Ippolito on May 8, 2013 at 2:18

Love the way you just suggest those boats in the back. Can you soften the back building a touch..not sure if I'm using the right word..just to push it back a bit more ( maybe fade ? Lighten the value? ..just to make it less important than the front building) nice saturated colors on the front!

Comment by Laura Xu on May 7, 2013 at 18:46

Thank you so much Jessica! You caught a great error for me. I don't know how I missed the legs. I will change to add them, assuming the people are sitting on the railing. Otherwise the legs are too long.

Comment by Jessica Futerman on May 7, 2013 at 18:22

Beautiful colour, Laura!  I like the way the sunlight is catching the umbrella, building & water.  Just one small suggestion - I think the people are a bit high - maybe you could lower them a little & add a few suggestions of their legs & some more railings? Or maybe just extend the red wall?

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