As suggested by Stu & seconded by Michael, lowered the chroma on the buildings in the foreground & added a few highlights on the water in the background....
Hopefully I improved it?
Water soluble oil on 12" x 16" canvas

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Comment by Jessica Futerman on May 25, 2013 at 6:50

Thank you very much Ningning!

Comment by Ningning Li on May 24, 2013 at 14:53

A beautiful one. Well done! Mostfully, I love the atmospere of it.  I also impressed by your nicely described details.

Comment by Jessica Futerman on May 24, 2013 at 7:10

Thank you Mario!  

Comment by Jessica Futerman on May 24, 2013 at 7:01

Thanks a lot for your helpful suggestions & compliments, Stu & Michael - greatly appreciated!

Comment by mario alberto velazquez on May 24, 2013 at 7:01

 I like the touches also, and the background of the painting !

Comment by Michael J. Severin on May 24, 2013 at 4:08

I agree!!!  By the way Jessica, your handling of the boats was very well done ...like the touches of warmth in that area.

Comment by Stuart J. Gourlay on May 24, 2013 at 3:08

Reads much better Jessica.  Excellent work!   Stu

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