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Comment by Frank Brooks on March 23, 2015 at 15:28

Thanks, I softened both, as well as working the shape of the dome. Reposted as #2 if you are interested in my attempt at correction.

thanks

Comment by Michael J. Severin on March 23, 2015 at 14:53

The water line,  my friend.

Comment by Frank Brooks on March 23, 2015 at 14:38

Thanks Colin, I appreciate the comment.  The dome isn't as bad as the photo shows, there is a bit more on the left than the photo indicates. I will look to make it show better as well as soften the distant edges. I will repost tomorrow with some mods.

Comment by Colin L. Williams on March 23, 2015 at 13:49

Frank - liked your gondola very much. I think we both struggled with the background buildings. Mine were too sharp-edged. Perhaps your main dome/cupola is asymmetrical?

Comment by Frank Brooks on March 23, 2015 at 11:41

Thanks Michael I appreciate your comments.  I assume you mean the roof line in the upper left,  I have lightened the hue a little also.

Comment by Michael J. Severin on March 23, 2015 at 11:00

Your gondola is painted very, very well Frank!!!! ....all you need to do now is soften that horizon line.  :)

Comment by Frank Brooks on March 21, 2015 at 13:26

Thanks for your comments.

Comment by Lori Ippolito on March 20, 2015 at 18:14

Nice Frank..Your gondola is well drawn!

Comment by Cristina Mihailescu on March 20, 2015 at 14:38

Very nice!!