Mediterranean Boats at Rest

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Comment by Cristina Mihailescu on May 31, 2016 at 2:50

Moody, very nice!

Comment by Paul Merrill on March 2, 2015 at 6:51

Thanks for the comments and critique Michael. I always enjoy hearing what others think, and the suggestions for improvement are always welcome. I started running low on time and I think I got a little rushed in the end.

Comment by Michael J. Severin on February 23, 2015 at 16:11

Hi Paul.  I like your simple shapes and understatement of the colors.  Your beach area is standing up like a wall.  This is because it is all the same value and temp. and hard edges at the rear.  Try raising the value of the beach so it is lighter then the light on the tower ..then cool this and soften the edges as it recedes to the back.  Maybe a little over blending on the boats.  The boats are the closest elements.  To make them appear to come forward, use more thick paint and texture ...and less thick paint in the background .especially the beach.

Comment by Olivia O'Carra on February 19, 2015 at 9:51

Nicely done Paul

Comment by Dorian Aronson on February 19, 2015 at 1:43

Good job on that drawing! Smiles to you ;-)

Comment by Sharon Casavant on February 18, 2015 at 5:02

Hi Paul, I like your comp as a whole!

Comment by Lori Ippolito on February 16, 2015 at 6:04

nice light on your buildings!

Comment by Karlo Bonacic on February 16, 2015 at 0:24

Love the colors and those lost edges in foregroung

Comment by Ruby on February 13, 2015 at 6:04

nice work Paul