Oil on gesso board..

Views: 107

Albums: Landscape

Add a Comment

You need to be a member of The Complete Artist to add comments!

Join The Complete Artist

Comment by Michael J. Severin on July 19, 2013 at 15:15

I think all you need to do is tone down the purple shadows on the left and give us 2 more values ...1 dark and 1 light.  I still think the orangy cliffs are to high chroma.  It is not a matter of changing color, but intensity.  Don't darken it, just de saturate it.  Once you desaturate it, then put in some darker darks (cracks) and a highlight at the focal point ..right on that edge that is congruent to the grass on the far cliff.  

Comment by Lori Ippolito on July 19, 2013 at 15:06
I wonder if it still needs maybe some yellow ochre sort of scraped over the orange?
Comment by Lori Ippolito on July 19, 2013 at 14:52
This is closer to the painting...uploaded from my IPad!!

About

The Complete Artist is a friendly social network for all artists wanting to improve their painting.

Get my FREE Painting Lessons here!

Groups

Photos

  • Add Photos
  • View All

Events

© 2024   Created by Richard Robinson.   Powered by

Badges  |  Report an Issue  |  Terms of Service