16x20 water mixable oil on canvas

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Comment by Jess Paskel on June 9, 2015 at 14:54
Thank you Ana, Pauline and Cristina very much.
Comment by Cristina Mihailescu on June 8, 2015 at 1:35

Wonderful!!

Comment by Pauline Le Merle on May 29, 2015 at 6:45

Absolutely lovely Jess!

Comment by Ana Murza on May 25, 2015 at 17:15

Beautiful!

Comment by Jess Paskel on May 25, 2015 at 15:43
Oh I see now, Lori, yes that's the lower area of the hill before it drops off. Maybe I should define the edge a bit more so it doesn't look confusing!
Comment by Lori Ippolito on May 25, 2015 at 14:09
I'm looking at that sand just to the right of the row of grasses..it looks warm next to the cool wet sand..its green and yellow orange on my screen..could be that it's actually the bottom of the hill?
Comment by Jess Paskel on May 25, 2015 at 13:54
Thank you so much Dennis and Lisa !
Comment by Jess Paskel on May 25, 2015 at 13:52
Lori thank you! Haha I thought you meant front .. all good same thing. I think your right those grasses are too repetitive. I really struggle with that! I'm going to see what I can do. Also the sand is pretty cool toned do you mean lighten it up a few values?
Comment by Lori Ippolito on May 25, 2015 at 13:38
Sorry about auto corrects!! Meant foreground (fg not ft) and again, foreground, not fog!!
Comment by Lori Ippolito on May 25, 2015 at 13:34
Great glowing light! Have a look at your grasses in ft..they seem a bit repetitive..maybe mess them up a bit? Also the beach closest to fog seems off..I wonder if you cooled the dark valued sand there a bit? Love your calm waters..a lovely early morning scene:)

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