Wanted achieve Bolder, but not sure improved. 16x12 oil on canvas board.

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Comment by Laura Xu on June 13, 2016 at 5:25

Thank you very much Michael!!! Lovely heard from you. I will try to enhance the area you commented. I painted Moss Landing again on Thursday. I find a good spot for plein aire. I will show you  anytime when you are the area.

Comment by Michael J. Severin on June 13, 2016 at 4:35

Great Laura!!  ... good edges, contrasts, brushwork, drawing, gradation, and color.  You have nicely depicted the effect of sunlight on the foreground sand and the white part of the boats hull ... now do the same with that patch of red that is in the sunlight .... show the same effect of sunlight hitting it as you did the other stuff.  Try putting some yellow/orange into it .. warm it up a little.  That's all you big time artist!!!! :))))))

Comment by Laura Xu on June 11, 2016 at 11:41

Thank you Jessica!

Comment by Jessica Futerman on June 11, 2016 at 5:15

Wonderful confident brush strokes, Laura!  And lovely control of values & colour!  

Comment by Laura Xu on June 10, 2016 at 15:09

Thank you Jon, Silvana!

Comment by Silvana M Albano on June 10, 2016 at 14:48

Super Laura!!!

Comment by Jon Main on June 10, 2016 at 7:46

I like this strong perspective - dynamic!

Comment by Laura Xu on June 10, 2016 at 4:15

Thank you Silke, Mireille, Stu! To paint boats is very good to practice my poor drawing skill.  

Comment by Stuart J. Gourlay on June 9, 2016 at 20:47

Nice brushstrokes, Laura!

Comment by Mireille Fournier on June 9, 2016 at 19:16
Its's beautiful and mistical Laura :)

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