Workshop 40

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Comment by Colleen McCafferty on February 24, 2015 at 0:45

Thank you Michael for your constructive comment which is very much appreciated and helpful.  I can see that I will have to revisit the painting!

Thank you also Cristina for your lovely comment too!

Comment by Michael J. Severin on February 23, 2015 at 16:21

Colleen, I like the glow on the beach and the luminosity of the sea wall ...they relate to each other quite well.  You lost the luminosity in the buildings due to over mixing and muddying your colors.  The dark side of the main boat should actually be made of warm greys.  The power of Richards painting is the strong design and contrast in the foreground ...re visit Richards original and see if you can duplicate. 

Comment by Cristina Mihailescu on February 23, 2015 at 12:36

Beautifully done Colleen!!

Comment by Colleen McCafferty on February 19, 2015 at 10:49

Thank you very much Olivia.  I appreciate your lovely comment.

Comment by Olivia O'Carra on February 19, 2015 at 1:28

Lovely work Colleen . I like the misty Background

Comment by Colleen McCafferty on February 13, 2015 at 10:23

Thank you Ruby, Sharon and Ann for your great comments.  I will revisit the sky!

Comment by Ann Turner on February 13, 2015 at 8:33

Nice perspective on the boats. The buildings and beach are in sunshine and the sky looks like an over cast rainy day. You may want to consider putting a little clearing patch of light in the sky.

Comment by Sharon Casavant on February 13, 2015 at 3:50

I like the way your beach turned out, going into the sea... I would lighten the sky a tad.  :)

Comment by Ruby on February 13, 2015 at 2:06

nicely painted Colleen