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Comment by Larry M. Williams on April 2, 2013 at 10:51

Thanks everyone with the observations.  The issue with the wave on the bottom wasn't looking right to me either.  But looking at it with "your" eyes really made the problem stand out.  I'm going to rework it right now.  Thanks again.  Larry

Comment by Stuart J. Gourlay on April 2, 2013 at 5:11

Larry, nice painting.  It is the shape of the wave under the boat that is bothersome.  It is too symmetric and the lighter colors look strange because they seem to predominate on the right hand side of the shape.  I think that redesign of this shape will strengthen the painting considerably.  I hope this is not more confusing than helpful.  Stu

Comment by David DEntremont on April 2, 2013 at 4:46

Excellent Job Larry!. Must be a windy day, can see the white caps ... Great job on the water.

Comment by Michael J. Severin on April 2, 2013 at 2:41

Larry,  Beautiful painting!!  .......I agree with Ann about the water under the boat. ............the rest of the ocean looks great!!

Comment by Ann Turner on April 1, 2013 at 17:49

I like the way that the sail goes out of the painting and cuts across the triangle of the land The sail is believable and the figures also. The angle of the water at the bottom center of the painting bothers me, the color maybe too saturated as it takes away from the main focus itmoves into the painting and out again without taking the viewer into the painting.